Thursday, September 24, 2015

200+ word sentence

Standing tall, a magnificent dark brown thoroughbred / quarter horse, a gorgeous steed among the pastures/ grazing with his hair remaining still as the wind while glistening in the glorious rays of blissful sunshine on a peacefully warm Sunday afternoon and this shining star of a horse goes by his suitable name, Tucker because despite how alluring his appearance is, he is a goofball, a clown, a comedian perhaps or something along those lines; a couple of examples being how he loves to eat Swedish fish, or how he decided to show his hesitant approval of josh by passing flatulence when he ran by on the track– or was somehow displaying a jealousy induced gas attack on josh smiling at his “witty” disapproval regards one can be well aware of his intriguing oddness and also see that he is still professional as he advances in the riding techniques I’ve taught his gracefully, he is a humorous delight, a stupid smart oxymoron, a future celebrity filled to the brim with talent, perseverance, and imbalanced obedience and he is not only a pet who doubles as an environmentally save car, he is also my friend, my family, and my weird horse that will rise up to be the best he can be.

Friday, June 19, 2015

1 Act 1 Scene Play

         Underestimated

Crystal, 28 works in an office building in the city near her apartment and a park. She has a black dog named Lance. She goes to the gym every morning. There is co-worker she doesn’t like but he keeps stalking her. She acts like her head is in the clouds but in reality she is very strong and level minded.
Eric, 33 works with crystal in a different department. He does a lot of work with her though. He lives on the other side of the city and likes to watch crystal but doesn’t know much about her. He can get aggressive but doesn’t show it much. He is a very stubborn person.
Setting – The park near the building where Eric and Crystal work.


Crystal: OK Lance today we’re going to have a nice day in the park. Today is such a nice day. It’s                    warm with a wonderful breeze.
Eric: hey Crystal! (Heavy breathing from running) Isn’t today such a nice day.
Crystal: yes it is. Did you just go for a run?
Eric: No I was running to come see you. I wanted to ask you something.
Crystal: Ok?
Eric: would you like to go on a date with me?
Crystal: I am sorry but no.
Eric: why not?
Crystal: Because I only see you as a co-worker and a friend.
Eric: But I have mustered up all this courage to ask you out.
Crystal: I’m sorry but personally I don’t see you that way.
Eric: Well I won’t take that I will have a date with you!
Crystal: I already said no
Eric: To bad, I will drag you if I have to!
Crystal: What does that mean?
Eric: Come with me! (Grabs her by the arm and pulls her)
Crystal: I already said no! (Not struggling much)
Eric: Yes you will! (Dog starts barking in background)
Crystal: I SAID NO! (Pulls away roughly)
Eric: Why do you resist, you know you want me
Crystal: EWWWW no I don’t
Eric: Yes you do
Crystal: No I don’t (pulls away again and his arm comes off too)
Eric: AAAAAAAA MY ARM. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!
Crystal: Well you tried to pull me. I don’t like that.
Eric: But you don’t pull someone’s arm off when trying to shake them off
Crystal: Well sorry but I didn’t have any choice you wouldn’t let go
Eric: Weren’t you just some weak girl like everyone else?
Crystal: DON’T YOU EVER UNDERESTIMATE A GIRL. I work out every morning and an a lot                     stronger then I might seem
Eric: Yea no shit!
Crystal: Maybe we should get you to a hospital
Eric: Yea (passes out, ambulance has arrived)

Scene Ends

Tuesday, June 9, 2015

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              There is a mall on the side on top of a high hill. On one side of the mall is the road that goes down to level ground. But the other side is basically a cliff. The edge of target is a rock cliff and if u end up down there it can get bloody. This was a wall of rocks. The bottom of the rocks is the highway of 146 in Millbury. This mall is one of the busiest malls around there. Many people go to this mall. The only problem many people disappear from this mall too. Oooooh. One Friday night there was a person hanging around the side of the target near the cliff. A bunch of saw him and though he was just some creep. So we thought nothing of it. But later on we heard screaming. We ran to see what happened and saw a girl that was thrown down the cliff. She was bouncing off the rocks. As we saw this the screaming stopped and we saw her head bounce over and over again. This was so disturbing. We then saw the man running away. We cased him and collided with him. We found out his identity then. Apparently he had done this before but the police never found evidence that could put him away. He started talking crazy like because he said “because you have seen this you will be next”. This was creepy and decided to bring him to the police. Once they started their investigation they couldn’t find the body, though they saw the blood on the rocks. We then went out with them and found the head of the girl. It was so sad. Because of the bouncing they couldn’t find out who she was but they had found the evidence to put this guy away. The only problem was he had an accomplice. He then hunted down 2 of the people I was with and they were thrown down the cliff as well. The same head bouncing happened and the police couldn’t find out their identity. About 2 months after this I went to the bottom with a friends dog and tucker (my horse). I saw the other bodies buried and thought it was strange how sloppy this work was. If they wanted to hide the bodies they should have either put them were no one could find them or dispose of them so no one could identify them. This pile was basically out in the open and was easily spotted. The police officer was either blind or was the accomplice. Tucker then started to get extremely nervous. There was an eerie feeling in the air. The wind started to pick up which got really creepy. Then we saw a black figure with a gun standing there. He was about to shoot us then bandit bounced on the man. He knows how to get the gun out of the man’s hand from his owners. I then tied his hands up and attached then to tuckers horn. I then brought him to the police station. I saw that he had given a full confession after about 8 hours of interrogation. During the interrogation I showed them where the bodies were and how he pulled the gun on me. I had brought the gun to them in a sleeve so I wouldn’t tamper with evidence. They also worked with the dog to see how he handled the situation. They saw that unless you were a treat he wouldn’t attack. If he saw a treat or told that it was a treat then he could attack. They were very impressed with the dog and asked why he wasn’t a police dog and I told them about the owners and why they didn’t add him to the program. Tucker was with me the whole time. This was strange for them but I told them that I don’t personally don’t trust him with anyone but me usually. I also used him to help me explain a lot of what happened and where things were. This amount of time for both criminals was very long and tiring. Once I knew that their conviction was finally announced I could finally relax and go back to daily life. This only thing I won’t be doing is going near target any time soon.

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            There is a whirlpool in the sky. What could this possible mean? I see something coming through. Oh no it’s some kind of ship. Could this be an alien invasion? Some people are saying it’s a plane or something but I know it’s really not just a plane. I see silver underneath. This is strange but not really surprising. People have been saying for years that the government has been covering up alien sightings and bodies. I think aliens could have intelligent ideas that could maybe help this mentally dying race. People have been getting more unintelligent and simple minded. This is just getting worse by the years. If we had actual intelligence than maybe we could fix out race. The aliens have officially landed. They are about 500 feet from where I am standing. This is crazy. The hatch is opining. I see a figure in the opening. It is my boyfriend’s little sister. This is so weird. Why is she standing there? She starts walking toward me. She says “Hey. I have traveled with this race for about a month now and I think you and josh should join me. I will get Kyle after I get you two”. I then said I would join and then were off to go get josh and Kyle. During the ride to get then we discussed our race and theirs. They were extremely friendly and knew a lot about our race. They said they noticed certain people who were qualified to meet them. I thought the word qualified was unusual but whatever. As we got josh he wasn’t completely on board with this as me and Anna where. He’s a realist so this was unusual and suspicious. But because I was there he said he would go along with it for now. Anna was so happy. When Kyle joined use she went a little crazy telling him stuff so fast he was extremely lost. Josh was at first but I know how to explain things to him. For Anna and Kyle this is a little early because they have been only dating for about a week. Josh and I have been going for 5 months. After the initial tour and explanation of the race and ship. They told us what they wanted us to do. I was such a weird request. They wanted us to explain how our phones and music work. They seemed to love them. But they had no idea how it worked. We showed them. To us this is a normal everyday thing but to them it is unusual and new. We then went to their planet and apparently stayed there for several months back on our planet but for there’s it was only about 12 to 24 hours. Their planet was all blues and greens with a dash of reds in places it was an absolutely beautiful place. They showed all the plants they have there and the type of technology they have. They soon asked up to play some of our music over some sort of speaker. Obviously this wasn’t a speaker we weren’t used to so it took some time to figure it out. The boy did that while Anna and I figured out what kind of music to play for them. This was like an alien concert and was very fun.  After the music playing we were sent home by teleportation. That experience was very unusual to all of us. After we got home we had to try to explain something we really couldn’t talk about. We said we were shipped off to another county by josh’s friends for some help. This wasn’t the easiest thing to come up with either. We had to answer a lot of pointless questions. Basically its best if no one knew what really happened. This kept everyone safe. 

Friday, June 5, 2015

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There is snow on the ground. It is cold on my hooves. I feel compelled to run in it. I have friends around me who look like they feel the same. I will now run through this amazing plush snow. My hooves rip up the nicely placed snow and now I have it all over me. It is so much fun. The others are doing the same and look like they feel the same way. This feeling is so mysterious. I hope my human friend will join me the next time is see her. My heart is beating. I am throwing snow everywhere and it’s amazing.  Some of the others don’t want to run but I don’t care I love this so much. I feel so free. My life is complete. I am a horse and I feel my heart pumping as I gallop through this snow field. I love running through the grasses during the warm season but this is also so enjoyable. I feel like everybody feels this way. But when I see my human friend I don’t always believe that. When I see her she is so happy to see me but when she is on me I can feel other issues. Sometimes she will tell me about them but most of the time she doesn’t need to. For her it seems I am sometimes a stress relief but all of the time I can feel the love from her. I help her with relieving the stress by being stubborn and when I know that annoyance is gone I will behave for her. When she is over her stress when then have the greatest time together jumping and galloping around. During the summer we will be outside and do the same things in a field. The field is way more fun than the ring but it’s still so much fun. When we are out in the fields she really lets me go full speed and we feel the power together. I can feel and hear that she is having the best time. I am overjoyed by this feeling as well. I feel overjoyed when I am jumping to but I love running just as much. There are other people that get on me but they are never the same as this girl. She is the perfect height. She weighs just right and I love how she holds the reins. She doesn’t use too much leg so my stomach barely gets touched, which is nice. I don’t have to intimidate her because of inexperience. She can really understand how I want to go. She is the perfect rider for me. I see her on other horses and she is comfortable on them but not the same connection as us. I watched her ride a friend of mine, sheriff. He loved how she rode him. She was working with him on Thursdays for about 2 or 3 months. She did amazing with helping him understand how to jump correctly and run the correct way in the ring. When we started being together in that lesson again I noticed that sheriff didn’t like other riders and was starting to get really temperamental.  They decided that no one would ride him again for lessons and stopped getting him out of the paddock. This saddened my human. But she still loved me. She also rode some others that were horrible when it came to most riders but with her they were perfect. I don’t know what she does but all horses just seem to love her. But they can’t have her she’s mine and I know I’m hers. She can enjoy other horses but I know she loves me the best. Though I hear she want this black horse but it seems she doesn’t want him/her while I’m around because she doesn’t want me to get too jealous.  She’s the best human a horse could have. J

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This is an eye. It is not just an ordinary eye. It is of an animal that that is over 1000 pounds. This animal is capable of many things. It can dance gracefully, jump higher then you could imagine, and run faster than the fastest man. When you look into this eye you might not see it. Only a few can really capture the true essence of the eye. If I look into this eye I see power, freedom, and an alluring feeling. This alluring feeling is very strong. When I see this animal I feel his thoughts and how he sees the world. This kind of feeling cannot be explained. Unless you have this connection you will never know this feeling. Some people try to feel this connection and some fail while doing it. This connection is so strong and overpowering, it can either incise you to pursue this more or break you down so much it will affect your feeling around this animal all the time.

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When you hear the clomp of the feet you will know what’s coming. The thunder of the hooves are so loud but somehow grace full. These hooves are loud and heavy but they know how to be silent as well. These hooves know how to make a dance so graceful you would never guess they weigh about 3000 pounds. They know how to jump as high as their legs will let them. The speed they can get to is phenomenal and I have captured that speed with him. When you see of this animal you think of a normal horse. But when I see this animal I think power and beauty. I see freedom in and with him. When I see him I feel the power and adrenaline running through me. I want to just hop on and go galloping. But galloping is way more complicated then it seems. When I feel the power I feel like I could jump as high as the sky with him but also run to the ends of the earth with him. I have a special connection with this majestic animal that no one can break. The wind in my face, the horse under me, and I feel like I could just do anything. 

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The clouds are dark. There’s a flash. Oh no lighting. The people start to freak. The animals start to pound their feet. Life is all hectic. People are rushing to cover everything. They are running into things, pushing others, and just not thinking. The animals are rushing to shelters and somewhere to feel save. The oceans have started to create tidal waves and whirlpools. People are getting more terrified. People assume the worst like the world is ending. The heavens are yelling at them. They are mad. They need humanity to understand their wrath. They will make sure humanity can truly learn from their mistakes. If not they will parish. If the people have been listening to their heavens and themselves then they will know what to do to survives and help others survive. But if they have closed their mind and hearts, and will not open them then they will never be able to survive. The way to survive this storm is to think outside normal ideas and think of older and new ideas to create ways to survive. This is lightning and water to deal with. It is hard to think of ways to harness these elements. 

Friday, May 15, 2015

3 form poems

Haiku:
An April’s morning,
Chilled, but quiet and peaceful,
I feel relaxed
Hymn:
Love only can the conquest win,
    And form my soul anew.                    
Love can Soften, and melt, and pierce, and
    Break an unshakable heart.
Love will commence to glow,
   And make the mountains flow!
Lyric:
I am a women, hear me roar,
I've been down there on the floor
You can bend but never break me,
And I will only come back stronger
I will spread my loving arms out,
Until I make my brothers understand
I am a woman and I will prevail

Monday, April 6, 2015

Two tones story

I am a boy from Sutton Ma. I am 23 years old. I worked 4 years in the Navy. I have 3 siblings, who all still live at home. 1 older sister, 1 younger brother, and 1 younger sister. The ages vary from 25 to 15. When I got out of the navy I came home to start going to an academy for being an aircraft mechanic. When I got home everyone was so happy to see me. The only problem is, it didn't last. My older sister Liz runs the whole house while she sits on her “ass” and does nothing. When I came back it was good for about 3 weeks, then her inner bitch came out. My family are considered the bible thumpers of the catholic religion. They are very religious and think everyone else should be too. Liz is a person who need to be perfect and control everything and freaks out if she cannot. I could live with that for a while because during the weekends I would go down to the farm with a friend of mine and cut wood and work on our amazing trucks. As I started to spend more time away from the house, she started to get so much worse. Every time I’m at the house I have to do every chore and it’s so annoying. It’s even worse now that I’m home maybe once or twice a week because I’m always at my girlfriend’s house. When I go home I try to just fall asleep and ignore them as much as I can. The family is trying to treat me like a 17 years old boy. I am a 23 adult. I can make my own choices and do not have to listen to my 25 year old sister as my mother!




                There was a party for my little sister’s conformation. There was an older friend of my little sisters and friend of my brother. She hasn't been around for quite some time or I just haven’t seen her because I was in the navy.  The last time I saw her she was maybe 9 or 10 playing with her little puppy. I didn't like my sibling’s friends so I avoided them. There was one time I was on leave at home and saw her but she had changed so much I thought it was someone else.  Apparently I was wrong. So during this party she was huddled in the corner so I went up to her and started talking to her. She was shy at first which is normal for her, but then we started talking about the things we liked and 6 hours later we were great friends. Over the next couple of weeks we would hang out and talk more to get to know each other. After about a month I asked her to be my girlfriend. We have been going strong for about 3 months now and I feel like I could spend the rest of my life with her. Even though she is only 18 she seems more mature then some of the 25 year olds I know. She can understand and have fun better than anyone I know. She also has a strong passion for horses that I love. She looks absolutely beautiful when she’s on and off her horse. I hope that everything goes well and we can stay together for the rest of our lives. 

Tuesday, March 24, 2015

Angry letter

Dear miss leaser,
                I am a horse owner and board at a facility. When a person is already in the ring working then they have dominance there. If you come into the ring during a lesson then you must stay out of the way of it. By staying out of the way, go to the half ring on the other side of where they are not working or if they are using the full ring then stay away from the horse that is already working. When it comes to the boarders and leasers there is a little different of a rule. If the horse that is already in there and is doing half ring then you ask them politely to stop for a minute so you can get to the other side of the ring. If they are using the whole ring then just stay to the wall and make sure you stay out of the way of the horse as it comes past you. You may never know if that horse bites, kicks, or has no problems with you. This is a safety rule. If a horse is being lunged then the same rule applies. The horse could kick from running or just be faster than you or your horse would like to go. Horses can be very competitive so you have to know your horse and the rules of the ring. If you add things to the ring then depending on where they are this rule can change just slightly. If they are jumping then just stay out of the horses path. If they are using trotting polls then same thing, stay out of the way or if u want to use them then stay far enough back behind them. Horses can be predictable and unpredictable. It is are job as riders to work with these animals and find out their unpredictable quarks and help then with is so it does not become dangerous for you or other horses around them. Once you have mastered that connection then that’s where the fun comes into play. You can then experiment with you and your horse.
Sincerely,

Tucker’s owner 

Thursday, March 12, 2015

Point of View Short Story

                Every weekend there were 2 guys with their girlfriends. They love to hang out at this farm that one of the girlfriends lives at. The two guys were having fun while getting drunk were being crazy and having fun with the tractors and trucks. While the girls watched them and talked with their drinks around somewhere. The girls where just as experienced as the guys when it came to the trucks. They were taught how to fix and play with them. Huge lifted Ford F250s big block and small block can always prove to be a good time. They put out so much noise because of the engines in them. The big block that one guy had was a red F250. The guy himself was skinny and mostly sober could easily win if the other guy was 1 too drunk to use his F250 and 2 the engine couldn't compete with the big block engine. The other guy who owned a silver small block F250 was the same height but had a smaller build and has a small beer gut, but was very muscular even though his build was small. These two guys have been best friends since 1st grade and are still amazing friends to this day. They have a lot of fun competing with their F250s. As a bystander watching it can always be amusing to see how much these two love playing with their trucks and chopping trees. While the guys drop trees they love to smoke and drink beer. This is fun and relaxing for them. The girls either join around them or have fun with things around the farm like the horse. They all love to just hang around and have a good time while at the same time making some extra money. At the end of the day when it starts to get dark they all travel to the camper for more types of alcohol. We also start up the hookah and try many different types of shisha. The shisha is was gets smoked through the hookah and has all types of amazing flavors. So there is always something to talk about while smoking hookah. There is amazing cell service there so YouTube always comes up during the night. Occasionally there will be a fire outside and burn brush while sitting around hanging out like with the hookah. That is usually during when it’s warm out.

The next morning after a long fun night. Everyone piles into their trucks and role to drunken doughnuts down at a gas station near the farm. The people their mostly know all of them by names. They male that works there doesn't even license check the boys anymore. During that next morning everyone will pack the nicely fresh cut wood and go to deliver it. After sometime one of the boys will get a call about going to pick up a round bail for the cows so everyone will end up rolling over there. Sometime at around 6ish one of the couples have to leave because they both have school the next morning. So they roll out and drive down to the girl’s house and cuddle in her room till they go to sleep. They then both go to school the next day and their week goes on. The other couple have different weeks. The boyfriend who owns the red truck is a plow driver and a tow driver. The girl helps around the farm and helps with the kids as they get home. During the week they barely see each other. The girls truck that she bought was a F150 and this is a troubling truck because they didn't know it had a broken frame so she’s going a little crazy being stuck on the farm all the time. So during the week the girls talk a lot to help each other out. They proved to be great friends in the end.

Thursday, February 26, 2015

The Plot Sickens: Free-write & Reflection

My free write had no violence in it. I personally would love to write about blood and gore. But I have a feeling it wouldn't go over with my particular teacher. I love the color of blood, personally. When students think of heroes it’s always people with money. This is very true. But in our generation the older or now a-day people we think of, they are all insane because they like to make up random things or say they plan to do something and then never live up to it. The expectations of the old “heroes” just aren't there anymore. The past generations all think young people are always up to something so they shut them out or order them not to do anything. This proves to be a very bad thing for the younger people. This is bad because if they have no one to go to then they prove themselves in another way. Their emotions basic show in everything they do but no one will open their eyes and take a look at what’s really happening. My free write is about my passion and completely deviates from what the author is saying about young writers. My life revolves around my passion for horse. Most of my writing will be revolving around my horse or the ones I want. But just for an amusement I like to be really messed up in the head and go for complete gore. I love blood and gore. This has nothing to do with the economy or politicians, it is only my mind having fun and experimenting with what I can accomplish in writing.   

Tuesday, February 24, 2015

Free Write about Fog

                It was Christmas Eve. Fog struck to the tarmac at Lindbergh field. People were waiting for many things. They were waiting for flights to leave or people to come pick them up. It was all lit up for Christmas. People were talking happily and/or singing away to the music over the speakers. All I could see was people, people, people! I don’t know if u can tell, but I don’t like lots of people in a huge crowd. I don’t mind a few but not crowds. I walk fast so walking slow pisses me off. As I went outside I was allowed to sneak back and see the planes because of all the fog no one could see me. Camouflage and black clothing is a wonderful thing for sneaking around whether u plan to or not. So as I snuck back I saw that the planes were trying to move through the fog. It was incredible stupid to do that because u can’t see the other ones. So since I have some experience with planes thanks to my boyfriend’s dad’s simulator that I have flown a couple of times. So being me I decided to go help before a huge crash happens. Luckily my horse was around the corner getting unloaded and soon will be in a trailer. We were there for hours before planning to leave. So I worked his jet leg out already so now he was just as bored as I was. In the time I had gotten him saddled and had on neon green equipment, the planes were told to stay put on lot and couldn't move from their parking spaces. So since we’re bored we decided that the field next to the runway was a perfect running area. As we walked to the runway area a small jet came down it, and it was my Josh (boyfriend) coming back from checking on his military friends. He rolled next to me and asked what I was up to. I said since no one was using the field I would take the chance and stretch Tucker’s legs (horse). He said I really shouldn't but it didn't stop me. So I continued my course and jogged him to the field to warm him up. We ran for about 2 hours then the fog started to leave. We decided it was time to go back and see if the trailer was there. He cooled down on the walk over. When we got back we had the trailer waiting and he was nice and cooled out. He was then loaded into it and we headed back home. Later that month, we heard on the news that hoof prints we spotted on the runway and in the field next to it. They said they might have swan a rider and horse pair through the fog. They said that they would make this a legend for all the kids to enjoy.     

Thursday, February 12, 2015

Self - Deprecation

                  During the end of last year there was an incident where my maturity level almost went out the window. Last year a bunch of us students would go and help clean the cafeterias after lunch. Certain people has certain jobs but if someone couldn't make it we would go the extra mile and help one another. Usually I never have a problem with controlling my temper. I wish I could solve things with fist fights but I would never actually get into one. There has only been a few occasions where I started a yelling match with someone out of anger but it hasn't happened in a long time. I would never start or intentionally throw a punch at someone. During this one time when we were cleaning the caff I almost completely lost all form of maturity. When we went to the caff this one afternoon, I was to put the chair back to their original tables. Two of my friends were told to clean the tables. When they finished cleaning I asked if they could help me since they were done, But for some reason that day they rudely said "no, we're busy!" while they just stood there watching me get more frustrated. During this time I took my temper out on the chairs by getting them all done way faster then I would normally. After I finished I went back to class and cooled down. Later that week we talked it out. We are now back to being friends and talk all the time.